FADE IN:
1 INT. JAKE'S HOUSE - BEDROOM - CLOSE ON ALARM CLOCK - 1
PREDAWN (4:59 AM)
In a Santa Clarita housing tract. It's dark.
WIDER ANGLE
Eyes glisten in the clock's shine, patiently watching the time.
BZZZZ! The ALARM SOUNDS. A hand that's been hovering over the clock drops. Silence. JAKE HOYT, a fit young man, rolls over, throws an arm over his sleeping wife --
JAKE
It's time.
-- she's not there, just empty blankets. He sits up, sporting a scraggly goatee, his hair growing out.
HIS POV
Lisa, his wife, in a rocking chair in the corner.
BACK TO SCENE
Jake is surprised. How'd she sneak off?
1 INT. JAKE'S HOUSE - BEDROOM - CLOSE ON ALARM CLOCK - 1
PREDAWN (4:59 AM)
In a Santa Clarita housing tract. It's dark.
WIDER ANGLE
Eyes glisten in the clock's shine, patiently watching the time.
BZZZZ! The ALARM SOUNDS. A hand that's been hovering over the clock drops. Silence. JAKE HOYT, a fit young man, rolls over, throws an arm over his sleeping wife --
JAKE
It's time.
-- she's not there, just empty blankets. He sits up, sporting a scraggly goatee, his hair growing out.
HIS POV
Lisa, his wife, in a rocking chair in the corner.
BACK TO SCENE
Jake is surprised. How'd she sneak off?
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